Short Story

This is a short description of a story based on Power/Conflict. It was an English assignment where I had to use the words:

Blond/Autumn
Slide/Park
Thorns
Jumper
Poppies
Trees

To make a story based on either of these topics and this is the end result. Please do not copy. This story is really important to me.

Please given me feed back and grade me
UK US
1 - U 1 - 0 GPA
2 - U 2 - 0 GPA
3 - U 3 - 0 GPA
4 - Pass 4 - 1.0 GPA
5 - C+ 5 - 1.7 GPA
6 - C+/B- 6 - 2.3 GPA
7 - B-/B+ 7 - 3.0 GPA
8 - B+/A- 8 - 3.3 GPA
9 - A-/A+ 9 - 4.0 GPA

THANKS