The Dance of the Doomed

A fan fiction of destiny, focuses on a few characters who are thrust into the wilds of Destiny's world. This is my first short story, I might make it longer but I'm not good a character development so -\_("-)_/-
Also if anyone has advice I'd love to hear it, this is something I wrote a long time ago and I'll probably be putting out new stuff so any help I can get is much appreciated.