"Didn't Mean to Scare Ya"

Journey Prike always hated the "normal". The unusual was perfect for her. Little did she know she was walking in the most strange, crazy, and thrilling place of all time (literally). S

This is just a test run on a story that I am currently writing that I really enjoy. Names may change in the future and the overall plot is not finished. I want to see what you guys think and if you want to leave some suggestions in the comments I would be happy to take them.