Tidbit of Random- That awkward first (1)

HEY GANG. Sorry... I like to be obnoxious...
These are a few of my poems/prose/thingymabobs that I wrote for my creative writing class... I haven't edited them, so I apologize in advance
If people seem to enjoy them I'll gladly post more. I've finally started writing a little story so maybe I'll try to get that posted too! :)
Please critique my work, I really would love some feedback.
If you can contain your need to promote yourself on this story... Please do so as well, I will read your works if you ask on my message board but not on my story! I find it a little rude... Or maybe just a descreet attempt to tell me... "your writing sucks, read my and EDUCATE YO SELF"
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Don't forget to smile. ^____^