So any suggestions?

The title says it all, also most of the characters belong to Dc

Editing facts
-This story is completed I hope you enjoy also this thing is so cringe thing OMI so sorry in advance. (OMFG GUYS I WROTE THIS WHEN I WAS 12 WHY TF DO Y'ALL READ THIS AND NO I HAVE TO REWRITE IT FOR MY OWN SANITY)
-Also I'll be adding songs to every chapter if I can