Introduction

This is my first actual piece of writing that I've done - fingers crossed that it gets finished, but the reality is that it probably won't.
Any feedback is appreciated ...

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Basic underline of this 'book':
Kidnapping of a young girl who is then brought into a sort of cult to be used as a sacrifice to some Satanic god, one of the main guys ends up falling in love with the victim and she then depends upon this to get out to safety - will probably be all over the place though!