Don't Read This Book, Chapter 14

Magdalena Wallace is the greatest writer in the world. She just doesn't know it. When three witches inform a thousand year-old necromancer that Lena can write a novel so powerful it can bring an end to human civilization, she's kidnapped and forced to write the book. Rescued, she's on the run with the manuscript - and the fate of humanity - in her backpack, and a whole lot of monsters hot on her heels!
I'll post a new chapter twice a week. The entire novel will come out next year, and I want to make this as good as it can be. I would love any feedback!