The Death Flight was defeated

Ok in my opinion this whole book is a mess, I can't say its a work I'm proud of and for that reason am currently working on a rewrite. Other people have told me they love this book and its really so feel free to read and if you have a suggestion for my rewrite feel free to comment it or pm me now heres the descriptions

Magic people, wizards and witches they call themselves. Apparently those are real. Of course they are and why wouldn't they needs us as soon as I was going to get a break. Just that special demigod luck I guess. So off to Hogwarts!