Fights and Stalkers

Black Veil Brides fanfic. Eighteen year old, Ally Mays, has a switch blade attitude and is looked down on because she's "gothic." She has a fight with her mom and turns out to be in major trouble, but luckily her saviours save her. Ally is living in reality, but it feels like a dream. Still in the process of writing this, but I hope everyone likes it! Tell me any suggestions on how to make it better! Thanks for reading :)