Story ONE- 'Internal Silent Struggle'

Just a few small stories. I want to try and get better at writing in general so YEH! You don't have to enjoy any of them but I would appreciate comments (e.g: constructive criticism). A few characters will have connected stories, but others will be completely made at random.

Also if you like fantasy, supernatural, adventure, etc etc GO READ 'On The Run' BY 'Sassy666' CAUSE IT'S REALLY GOOD AND WELL WRITTEN!

Tanks yooou~
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