Hidden in the Shadows

Okay it's been like YEARS since this has been written and yes I know it is terrible but at least I tried right?
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City of Broken Hearts is about what happens after the occurrences of page 511 in CoLS. Alec gets down in the dumps after the break up and Magnus notices Alec is self harming. I will warn you, I'm not a great writer, this is my first book, so feel free to say something if anything doesn't feel right or if you find a spelling mistake. Thanks.