Red Sky (Black/Native American Love Story)

This is a story i wrote in 6th grade. It will be way more mature though. It's about A Native American man and A Black woman. This is a preview of the first chapter.

My name is Lilia Marie. I'm an ex-slave. My father was freed by his owner in his will, so he took our family out west.My mother, brother, and husband died of Chrlorea while we traveled with a wagon train. Once we made it half way, we stopped. While we slept, we were ambushed at night. They killed all the men and children but took me,May, and Rachel. They're mixed race twins who pass for White. The Cheyenne warriors took us to their village. They crowded around us, looking and observing. An old Native woman with long grey hair in two braids came up to me.She touched my skin and lifted my arms. She spoke a language I couldn't understand. A older man made a call and a young man came towards me. He was tall, bronze skinned, long braided hair with feathers and his body was very musclar.He was gorgeous. He spoke the same language as the woman. She turned to me and asked

"Have you lost someone to disease?"