Dark Night Stars (Lyric poem)

This is a collection of my poems, I hope you like them and i dont know if its good but if you like it. Please vote and thank you for reading my stories and writing. Please correct my grammar. The reason I call it unfinished is because my poems are missing the key ingredient of elements. I still need to work on it so that why. But still I hope you like them is just word play not really poetry. :). Since when is a poem finished? * credit to Avogrado6*. Lastly updates every Friday but depends on how much I finish.