Dead or Alive?

I actually wrote a story in the POV of Lily in the movie, "We Bought a Zoo" who is played by Elle Fanning. This is something similar to a short fanfiction about the relationship between these two characters, Lily and Dylan and I just wanted to share it to you guys. Here it is.
-And please if you have time, leave any comments or feedback about this story. I would really appreciate that!