Rewritng

OLD

They were friends,

She had a mission,

When she came back,

Her place was filled.

"I don't fell anger towards Sakura-San." "but I do feel disappointment in Nogi-San and Hyuuga-San"

NEW

"My name is Narizko Kamiko! I'm and heiress and a famous Idol! Although I'm only ten I have made a name for myself and I'm proud of it!"

Having bad parents isn't so bad if your Alice is strong and you have brains.

"Hello Kamiko-Sam I'm Narumi! I offer you a place at Alice Academy!"

"Hello my name is Narizko Kamiko! You can all call me Kamiko though!"

"You must be bear! Would it be ok if I made some tea? It's quite cold today!"

"Singing is fun Ne?"