Chapter 1

Uh.. aloha everyone, this is a story I've been working on. I was wondering if whoever reads this can give suggestions, for I am stuck at the moment.
Anyways
This is a story when two peasant twins get separated. The younger of the two is Crystal , she gets kidnapped by an upper class demon. Which means her older brother whose name is Josh has to embark on an adventure to save his beloved sister. Their will be unexpected twists and turns.

Will he save her in time? is this adventure all for nothing?

Hope you'll enjoy

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