The Strongest vs. Their Secrets

I don't really know how to describe it. I don't want to like give it away, i wrote it really quick. Like I've never written a poem in a day and actually somewhat like it. Im just going to let you guys read it and hope for the best. Comment if you like it and if you don't! Let me Know! If you have anything on grammar or spelling let me know please i am horrible at it!! So please let me know what you think, if i should change it or anything put it in the comments so I can look at it. There aren't going to be any other parts to this also! This is the whole thing unless i change my mind and want to add on to it.