Allegiant a new ending

So, the ending to Allegiant sucks tremendously. I mean countless tissue boxes have been wasted while reading it. So I have created an alternate ending. Veronica Roth is the author of this wondrous story line, and sadly I'm a homily fan girl. I'm not the best writer so there's grammar and spelling issues, HUGE ALLEGIANT SPOILERS! This story is to HELP YOU COPE; BTW THE COVER IS CROOKED CUZ I TOOK THAT PIC OF MY VERY OWN ALLEGIANT BOOK SRRY!!
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This story takes place right after Tris was shot.