The Beginning

Serenity meets someone who just wants to use her, a man that loves her, and a girl that will save her.
Serenity is a girl who just misses her dad, loves her mom, and just wants to live her life. Apparently, if you have wings of fire that is a bit hard to do. Serenity made a deal with the devil, her mother in mind. She meets her soul mate, but doesn't feel safe around him. She becomes one with Madison, and knows she is either her saver or killer.
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