Mistakes

Dan is new to this town, and was going into grade 10-11. He was shy but when he caught someone's attention he stared to feel, more confident.. so then he- read story for details| I also added; Septiplier (Markiplier//Jacksepticeye, CJay (CrabSticks//KickThePJ, PewDieCry (Cryatotic//PewDiePie, Tam (TinyBoxTim//Sam (as humans)