Chapter 1:The Beginning

This is the original version of the story I wrote from high school and it only has ten chapters. Hope you all like my story and please tell me what you think of the original version because I will be rewriting it with more chapters and longer story. I will also be changing some of the characters names and appearances too. If you have any suggestions you like me to add to the story let me know and please make it appropriate because this is supposed to be a children's story.

Thank you