Story Plot/Plans/Discriptions/Etc

It all began in New York.
It all ended with a choice.
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Hello! My name is Kate, but I usually go by Red. This is a story that I've had the idea of writing for a while, but I just haven't had the time. Now it's summer and I have basically all the time in the world to write! I hope y'all like it and become as emotionally invested with it as I already have!
I am completely open to commentary and suggestions to make my writing better, so please, if you'd like, don't hesitate to comment! If you see any grammatical problems or misspellings feel free to say so, I do look over these chapters when I'm done to check for such things, but I'm prone to making mistakes!
Love y'all to pieces!
-Red