Chapter one Unexplainable feelings and vomit

This is a story about two twin sisters and one of the sisters experience when the other attempts suicide. This is my first short story and it's probably really bad. I don't really have a passion for writing I like Drawing and art (I drew the cover it's a doodle of Hope and it's not the " official cover it's just a placeholder) I like criticism a lot because I honestly really want to improve and i'm not hyper sensitive so yeah I hope you like what I have so far. Also there a curse words and the story will eventually be about being trans and not just about suicide.