An awful day?

here is the suspenseful story I wrote for english and showing it to you, hope you enjoy. Remember this is my first ever story so tell me if there is any mistakes.
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this is going to be awful and cringy.
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kill me, this is really awful.
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Tell me if I have grammar mistakes.
Finished and started june 9, 2017