Bringing in the Characters

So I've read a lot of Watching the Movie Fanfics, but not a lot of watching the series fanfics. So let's see what happens when I show Race to the Edge to the past Berk, before they have befriended dragons, but after Hiccup became friends with Toothless. Let's say when Stoick and the adults have returned from trying to find the nest. First Fanfiction I've written, so no flames please. Constructive criticism is always welcome.