Got Time

Story takes place in California, it starts in a prison, and the inmate Hector is the one telling the story. Its a present/ flashback story. So it has a lot of mixed parts which i believe would make it great, because once the flash back stops it would leave you hooked to find out what else happens. This is the first time i write anything like this, so please leave feed back to help make it better. (unfinished)