The Car Ride

"Tragic Love Story", is basically something I just decided to start writing, I don't know where I came up with this but it won't leave my mind until I start writing it. It's about a girl who ends up moving a lot because of getting bullied for being different then the rest of the kids. her mom ends up dropping her off at a new school and no one realizes how long she will be there for, or who she meets. I have never wrote for fun before so if you comment/ critic I would like to hear your ideas on what to fix just don't make it too mean.