Acid Hearts (Narry Storan Fan Fiction)

Hey, people, so this is my first fiction but please don't give up on me.
I think I'm doing quite well so I am hoping that you will stick with me.
P.s. If I have any mistakes in grammar tenses or anything else, please, I'm begging you, just tell me because English is not my language :D k. hope you like it
Always yours,
Suzzy
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