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Something I wrote for my English class that I'm actually pretty proud of:) I was in AP Lang last year and It was actually kind of weird just writing a simple fiction short story. No rhetorical analysis, No are you my opinion, just writing what came up in my head. Anyway, this ending picks up as if he didn't confess.

A young woman pursuing an extra credit assignment leads her to an ambitious interview with a serial killer on death row. She learns early on that not everything she has been told may be true about him. For better or for worse. I've given "Discord" a mature rating because some of the content may be uncomfortable for a select few. I do not personally believe it to be anything worse than PG-13 but not everyone may share that opinion. All feed back is appreciated thank you for your time.

Well I love stw and this is a strong of a force sensitive boy my charecter finding a grey Jedi temple and learning there ways on his own. The time line is in the middle of the clone wars. My charecter his free to use just don't kill him and give full credit for him and thanks love yall

hi I'm Lindsay and I'm kinda making this to vent and get some feedback on a few things I'm doing it as a type of therapy bc I need it but am in a kinda hard situation

This is a place where I release a chapter or two of a book idea I have in mind, and you guys let me know if it's worth continuing or not. ───────────────────────── Potential genres: ○ Fantasy ○ Romance ○ Dystopian ○ Coming Of Age And more!

I don't really know what this is I'm just gonna tell you that...... I just want feedback for what I have so please tell me what doesn't make sense what doesn't work and other stuffs! You'll be my editors!

This is a fantasy medieval story. A boy is running but from what? He's scared and confused and can't seem to think straight.

This is a short story i made for school, it's not of great quality but i would be very happy for any useful feedback or ideas. It is about a mother trying to figure out why her daughter is acting weird.

Me: hello to who ever poor soul reading this for one sorry for my lack for the two story's anyway do you and good bye