Starting my afterlife... in hell (Pilot) [edited a bit]

Y/n was a very famous puppeteer when he was alive in the 1980s. He put on shows for all people, until he was caught murdering someone in the backstage of one of his shows. He was soon put to death in 1983.

Not too long after he died he had a reputation for himself. He was soon called 'The Marionette'. How he got the title you'll have to read for yourself!
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