Day 1 with my uncle and his son

This is a story about me having a fun stay at my uncle and his son's house. During this story, we get into a lot of really crazy shenanigans, problems occur, fun times are had, and a lot of great memories are made too.
I really hope that one day this can actually happen.
this story by far is one of my favorites I've written so far. when working on it some of the parts make me get a little emotional. but by emotion, I mean happy tears.
This story by no means finished. I would like it if you can give me some comments on what I can add or make better in my story.